Narcissus and echo poem

“Narcissus and Echo” by Fred Chappell – Shenandoah

Shall the water not remember   Ember

my hand’s slow gesture, tracing above   of

its mirror my half-imaginary   airy

portrait? My only belonging   longing,

is my beauty, which I take   ache

away and then return as love   of

of teasing playfully the one being   unbeing.

whose gratitude I treasure   Is your

moves me. I live apart   heart

from myself, yet cannot   not

live apart. In the water’s tone,   stone?

that shining silence, a flower   Hour,

whispers my name with such slight   light:

moment, it seems filament of air,   fare

the world become cloudswell.   well.


Originally published in Shenandoah Issue 50, Volume 1

A North Carolina native, Fred Chappell is the author of numerous books of poetry, including The World Between the Eyes and Midquest, as well as several novels and short story collections. He is the recipient of myriad awards, including the Bollingen Award and the T.S. Eliot Prize. He served as North Carolina’s Poet Laureate from 1997 until 2002.

Chappell’s poem “Narcissus and Echo” recalls the ancient Latin story of the same name that appears in Ovid’s Metamorphoses. Ovid’s tale depicts Echo, a nymph who cannot speak except to repeat the last few words she has heard. Echo sees and falls instantly in love with the beautiful and conceited Narcissus, who famously fell in love with his own reflection in a pool of water. When Narcissus cruelly rejects her, Echo’s body withers away and eventually turns to stone, leaving only her voice to eternally echo throughout the world.

Keeping the original story in mind, the reader can interpret Chappell’s poem as a one-sided dialogue between Echo and Narcissus. The italicized words at the end of each line mimic Echo’s faint, half-heard voice. Like Echo, these words repeat the same sounds as the last words of the non-italicized lines. Read together, the italicized words create a message from Echo to Narcissus: “Ember of airy longing, ache of unbeing. Is your heart not stone? Hour, light: fare well”. The words “Ember of airy longing, ache of unbeing” refer to her formless state—one that is more painful because it keeps her from ever being able to accomplish her love in any physical way. Her desperate question for Narcissus—Is your heart not stone?—and final unrecognized goodbye emphasize how lonely and underserved her love is.

Since the italicized lines represent Echo’s voice, the upright words must represent Narcissus’s. Juxtaposed next to Echo’s quiet agony, his blind self-absorption strikes the reader as ridiculous. Narcissus, too preoccupied flirting with himself in the water, does not recognize Echo’s last desperate attempt to garner his attention. Instead, he teases his own reflection, playing peek-a-boo with himself in the glassy pool. His absorption is so complete that Echo’s final farewell strikes him as nothing more than a flower’s whisper, “with such slight moment, it seems a filament of air”. Chappell’s poem leaves the reader with a sense of the tragedy of unrequited, undeserved love, and of the absurdity of narcissism.

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Ovid : Echo & Narcissus

Ovid : Echo & Narcissus Ovid's Metamorphoses : Echo and Narcissus

                         Tiresias' fame of prophecy was spread
                         through all the cities of Aonia,
                         for his unerring answers unto all
                  480 who listened to his words. And first of those
                         that harkened to his fateful prophecies,
                         a lovely Nymph, named Liriope, came
                         with her dear son, who then fifteen, might seem
                         a man or boy--he who was born to her
                  485 upon the green merge of Cephissus' stream--
                         that mighty River-God whom she declared
                         the father of her boy. --
                         she questioned him.
                         Imploring him to tell her if her son,
                  490 unequalled for his beauty, whom she called
                         Narcissus, might attain a ripe old age.
                         To which the blind seer answered in these words,
                         "If he but fail to recognize himself,
                         a long life he may have, beneath the sun,"--
                  495 so, frivolous the prophet's words appeared;
                         and yet the event, the manner of his death,
                         the strange delusion of his frenzied love, confirmed it.
                         Three times five years so were passed.
                         Another five-years, and the lad might seem
                  500 a young man or a boy. And many a youth,
                         and many a damsel sought to gain his love;
                         but such his mood and spirit and his pride,
                         none gained his favour.
                         Once a noisy Nymph,
                  505 (who never held her tongue when others spoke,
                         who never spoke till others had begun)
                         mocking Echo, spied him as he drove,
                         in his delusive nets, some timid stags.--
                         for Echo was a Nymph, in olden time,--
                  510 and, more than vapid sound,--possessed a form:
                         and she was then deprived the use of speech,
                         except to babble and repeat the words,
                         once spoken, over and over.
                         Juno confused
                  515 her silly tongue, because she often held
                         that glorious goddess with her endless tales,
                         till many a hapless Nymph, from Jove's embrace,
                         had made escape adown a mountain. But
                         for this, the goddess might have caught them. Thus
                  520 the glorious Juno, when she knew her guile;
                         "Your tongue, so freely wagged at my expense,
                         shall be of little use; your endless voice,
                         much shorter than your tongue." At once the Nymph
                         was stricken as the goddess had decreed;--
                  525 and, ever since, she only mocks the sounds
                         of others' voices, or, perchance, returns
                         their final words.
                         One day, when she observed
                         Narcissus wandering in the pathless woods,
                  530 she loved him and she followed him, with soft
                         and stealthy tread.--The more she followed him
                         the hotter did she burn, as when the flame
                         flares upward from the sulphur on the torch.
                         Oh, how she longed to make her passion known!
                  535 To plead in soft entreaty! to implore his love!
                         But now, till others have begun, a mute
                         of Nature she must be. She cannot choose
                         but wait the moment when his voice may give
                         to her an answer.
                  540 Presently the youth,
                         by chance divided from his trusted friends,
                         cries loudly, "Who is here?" and Echo, "Here!"
                         Replies. Amazed, he casts his eyes around,
                         and calls with louder voice, "Come here!" "Come here!"
                  545 She calls the youth who calls.--He turns to see
                         who calls him and, beholding naught exclaims,
                         "Avoid me not!" "Avoid me not!" returns.
                         He tries again, again, and is deceived
                         by this alternate voice, and calls aloud;
                  550 "Oh let us come together!" Echo cries,
                         "Oh let us come together!" Never sound
                         seemed sweeter to the Nymph, and from the woods
                         she hastens in accordance with her words,
                         and strives to wind her arms around his neck.
                  555 He flies from her and as he leaves her says,
                         "Take off your hands! you shall not fold your arms
                         around me. Better death than such a one
                         should ever caress me!" Naught she answers save,
                         "Caress me!"
                  560 Thus rejected she lies hid
                         in the deep woods, hiding her blushing face
                         with the green leaves; and ever after lives
                         concealed in lonely caverns in the hills.
                         But her great love increases with neglect;
                  565 her miserable body wastes away,
                         wakeful with sorrows; leanness shrivels up
                         her skin, and all her lovely features melt,
                         as if dissolved upon the wafting winds--
                         nothing remains except her bones and voice--
                  570 her voice continues, in the wilderness;
                         her bones have turned to stone. She lies concealed
                         in the wild woods, nor is she ever seen
                         on lonely mountain range; for, though we hear
                         her calling in the hills, 'tis but a voice,
                  575 a voice that lives, that lives among the hills.
                         Thus he deceived the Nymph and many more,
                         sprung from the mountains or the sparkling waves;
                         and thus he slighted many an amorous youth.--
                         and therefore, some one whom he once despised,
                  580 lifting his hands to Heaven, implored the Gods,
                         "If he should love deny him what he loves!"
                         and as the prayer was uttered it was heard
                         by Nemesis, who granted her assent.
                         There was a fountain silver-clear and bright,
                  585 which neither shepherds nor the wild she-goats,
                        that range the hills, nor any cattle's mouth
                         had touched--its waters were unsullied--birds
                         disturbed it not; nor animals, nor boughs
                         that fall so often from the trees. Around
                  590 sweet grasses nourished by the stream grew; trees
                         that shaded from the sun let balmy airs
                         temper its waters. Here Narcissus, tired
                         of hunting and the heated noon, lay down,
                         attracted by the peaceful solitudes
                  595 and by the glassy spring. There as he stooped
                         to quench his thirst another thirst increased.
                         While he is drinking he beholds himself
                         reflected in the mirrored pool--and loves;
                         loves an imagined body which contains
                  600 no substance, for he deems the mirrored shade
                         a thing of life to love. He cannot move,
                         for so he marvels at himself, and lies
                         with countenance unchanged, as if indeed
                         a statue carved of Parian marble. Long,
                  605 supine upon the bank, his gaze is fixed
                         on his own eyes, twin stars; his fingers shaped
                         as Bacchus might desire, his flowing hair
                         as glorious as Apollo's, and his cheeks
                         youthful and smooth; his ivory neck, his mouth
                  610 dreaming in sweetness, his complexion fair
                         and blushing as the rose in snow-drift white.
                         All that is lovely in himself he loves,
                         and in his witless way he wants himself:--
                         he who approves is equally approved;
                  615 he seeks, is sought, he burns and he is burnt.
                         And how he kisses the deceitful fount;
                         and how he thrusts his arms to catch the neck
                         that's pictured in the middle of the stream!
                         Yet never may he wreathe his arms around
                  620 that image of himself. He knows not what
                         he there beholds, but what he sees inflames
                         his longing, and the error that deceives
                         allures his eyes. But why, O foolish boy,
                         so vainly catching at this flitting form?
                  625 The cheat that you are seeking has no place.
                         Avert your gaze and you will lose your love,
                         for this that holds your eyes is nothing save
                         the image of yourself reflected back to you.
                         It comes and waits with you; it has no life;
                  630  it will depart if you will only go.
                         Nor food nor rest can draw him thence--outstretched
                         upon the overshadowed green, his eyes
                         fixed on the mirrored image never may know
                         their longings satisfied, and by their sight
                  635 he is himself undone. Raising himself
                         a moment, he extends his arms around,
                         and, beckoning to the murmuring forest; "Oh,
                         ye aisled wood was ever man in love
                         more fatally than I? Your silent paths
                  640 have sheltered many a one whose love was told,
                         and ye have heard their voices. Ages vast
                         have rolled away since your forgotten birth,
                         but who is he through all those weary years
                         that ever pined away as I? Alas,
                  645 this fatal image wins my love, as I
                         behold it. But I cannot press my arms
                         around the form I see, the form that gives
                         me joy. What strange mistake has intervened
                         betwixt us and our love? It grieves me more
                  650 that neither lands nor seas nor mountains, no,
                         nor walls with closed gates deny our loves,
                         but only a little water keeps us far
                         asunder. Surely he desires my love
                         and my embraces, for as oft I strive
                  655 to kiss him, bending to the limpid stream
                         my lips, so often does he hold his face
                         fondly to me, and vainly struggles up.
                         It seems that I could touch him. 'Tis a strange
                         delusion that is keeping us apart.
                  660 "Whoever thou art, Come up! Deceive me not!
                         Oh, whither when I fain pursue art thou?
                         Ah, surely I am young and fair, the Nymphs
                         have loved me; and when I behold thy smiles
                         I cannot tell thee what sweet hopes arise.
                  665 When I extend my loving arms to thee
                         thine also are extended me -- thy smiles
                         return my own. When I was weeping, I
                         have seen thy tears, and every sign I make
                         thou cost return; and often thy sweet lips
                  670 have seemed to move, that, peradventure words,
                         which I have never heard, thou hast returned.
                         "No more my shade deceives me, I perceive
                         'Tis I in thee--I love myself--the flame
                         arises in my breast and burns my heart--
                  675 what shall I do? Shall I at once implore?
                         Or should I linger till my love is sought?
                         What is it I implore? The thing that I
                         desire is mine--abundance makes me poor.
                         Oh, I am tortured by a strange desire
                  680 unknown to me before, for I would fain
                         put off this mortal form; which only means
                         I wish the object of my love away.
                         Grief saps my strength, the sands of life are run,
                         and in my early youth am I cut off;
                  685 but death is not my bane--it ends my woe.--
                         I would not death for this that is my love,
                         as two united in a single soul
                         would die as one. "
                         He spoke; and crazed with love,
                  690 returned to view the same face in the pool;
                         and as he grieved his tears disturbed the stream,
                         and ripples on the surface, glassy clear,
                         defaced his mirrored form. And thus the youth,
                         when he beheld that lovely shadow go;
                  695 "Ah whither cost thou fly? Oh, I entreat
                         thee leave me not. Alas, thou cruel boy
                         thus to forsake thy lover. Stay with me
                         that I may see thy lovely form, for though
                         I may not touch thee I shall feed my eyes
                  700 and soothe my wretched pains." And while he spoke
                         he rent his garment from the upper edge,
                         and beating on his naked breast, all white
                         as marble, every stroke produced a tint
                         as lovely as the apple streaked with red,
                  705 or as the glowing grape when purple bloom
                         touches the ripening clusters.
                         When as glass
                         again the rippling waters smoothed, and when
                         such beauty in the stream the youth observed,
                  710 no more could he endure. As in the flame
                         the yellow wax, or as the hoar-frost melts
                         in early morning 'neath the genial sun;
                         so did he pine away, by love consumed,
                         and slowly wasted by a hidden flame.
                  715 No vermeil bloom now mingled in the white
                         of his complexion fair; no strength has he,
                         no vigor, nor the comeliness that wrought
                         for love so long: alas, that handsome form
                         by Echo fondly loved may please no more.
                  720 But when she saw him in his hapless plight,
                         though angry at his scorn, she only grieved.
                         As often as the love-lore boy complained,
                         "Alas!" "Alas!" her echoing voice returned;
                         and as he struck his hands against his arms,
                  725 she ever answered with her echoing sounds.
                         And as he gazed upon the mirrored pool
                         he said at last, "Ah, youth beloved in vain!"
                         "In vain, in vain!" the spot returned his words;
                         and when he breathed a sad "farewell!" "Farewell!"
                  730 sighed Echo too. He laid his wearied head,
                         and rested on the verdant grass; and those
                         bright eyes, which had so loved to gaze, entranced,
                         on their own master's beauty, sad Night closed.
                         And now although among the nether shades
                  735 his sad sprite roams, he ever loves to gaze
                         on his reflection in the Stygian wave.
                         His Naiad sisters mourned, and having clipped
                         their shining tresses laid them on his corpse:
                         and all the Dryads mourned: and Echo made
                  740 lament anew. And these would have upraised
                         his funeral pyre, and waved the flaming torch,
                         and made his bier; but as they turned their eyes
                         where he had been, alas he was not there!
                         And in his body's place a sweet flower grew,
                  745  golden and white, the white around the gold.

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Konstantin Balmont

Narcissus and echo

A narcissus flower, and a cherished sound,
Rising up with an answer, but unanswered.
Above the depths of the water, dead-mirror,
A sad flower freezes fruitlessly,
They are deceived by their beautiful face,
Not heeding external pleas and cries.
A cherished sound, although external,
Forever permeated with unearthly longing,
Jealous, praying, threatening, prophesying,
And sobbing, and now laughing.
But there is no merging for two beautiful ones,
We stand separately in passionate torments.
And the sounds go out, and the waters are clear
In the soulless realm of deaf Nature.

About nature

Silver Age

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Perhaps in years, perhaps in days,

With you we will be together, and we will be alone.

About love

I am not one of those

I am not one of those whose name is legion,

I am not from the realm of nameless spirits.


But if

But if you are snowy

And if you are frosty -

About love

Yes and no



Silver Age


Oh, excitement of life! Oh light and love!

When will we meet again?


Who is whom

I am overtaking. I overtake. I go around. I will overtake.

I do magic. Whirlwinds I hear. I am warming the harness of the horse.


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90,000 NARCISS and ECHOSE (Historical Poems)

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Νύμφεςτουδάσουςπουέκλαιγε. ΚαιμαζίμετιςνύμφεςφώναξεΗΧΏ.

Απότότε, τολουλούδιτουθανάτουπουονομάζεταινάρκισος . ...

Narcissus and echo
(antique rhyme hexameter)

Nymphs cried, and wept bitterly Echo.
Weeping ascended to Olympus in the heavenly height
And even there it was not heard that day laughter.
Death flower has since been called daffodil.

Where Aphrodite's foot silently trod,
Everywhere flowers bloomed and were beautiful.
The charms of the goddess all people and animals, Charites1 -
Everyone obeyed. And the gods were subject to them.

Happiness and joy, delight and love prompted
In those who bring gifts to her, her respects.
But a cruel sting awaited those punishments,0013 Who rejects both love and goddess gifts.

So punished, defending her laws,
A young man, the offspring of the river god Kefiss
And the forest nymph, his beloved Lavriona,
Cold and heartless son - Narcissa.

Beauty is nowhere to be seen gave passage,
He did not love anyone, only honoring himself.
Only himself he is worthy among the rest of the people
Tender beautiful love with conviction counting.

somehow lay down near the lake after hunting
He relax. There I wandered in a purple tunic
Young Echo, Narcissa saw - oh you!
But she couldn't not say a word to him -

For chatting on Olympus, for interfering
Nicely talk with Zeus to the all-powerful goddess,
Hera brutally punished her with dumbness -
The nymph was before her only in this is guilty.

Was Hera's curse is like a magnolia knife -
young nymph beautiful, with a cheerful disposition
Deprived of speech completely, only allowing to repeat,
To her from that what he hears, the last word.

Echo, hiding behind him watched with delight.
So she left would, but a dry branch crunched.
"Who is there?" Narcissus called, but not loudly.
"Here!" - repeated the beautiful nymph, sighing.

Louder Narcissus: "Hey, come here!" - calls out.
Echoes: "Here!" - young Echo is not loud to him.
He looked around: "Come to me!" - without even knowing
What the A sweet stranger is hiding in the trees.

Joyfully nymph: "To me!" - responded and left,
hands to him holding out. He rejects her:
"How tired women breathe down my back!”,
Echo, offended cruel in tears runs away.
These words Aphrodite accidentally heard,
Strongly was angry: “Well, so you love the same!
Only you you will be just as cruelly humiliated,
cold there will be someone who will be closer to you all"

Fast the goddess of vengeance overtook Narcissus
He, leaning over the still water
To wash, saw my reflection
in the waters lacustrine deep mirror cool -

beautiful with a regal article.
And it seemed it is suddenly just as beautiful,
Like him myself. And instantly filled with grace
Heart Narcissa, he fell in love strangely and passionately.

He, bent (close) over the water mirror,
"Us only a cold strip separates the water.
come out to me, I beg you!" - from passion heat
broke free a cry of despair, a plaintive exclamation.

Long looked at himself until sunset.
Understood Narcissus, that his request will not be fulfilled,
What is so dry up his love, wept bitterly.
Here they fell burning tears from his eyes

In the mirror water. Muted circles in succession
Lakes are smooth. The reflection immediately disappeared
"Where are you? - Narcissus shouted here - Stay with me!
Give look at you, come back!”. It's no use...

A young man in an instant turned pale and felt soon,
Life forever leaves a beautiful body.
Way down head bowed. He whispered: "Oh, grief," -
Echo: "Oh woe!" - repeated after him and sat down

Next to Narcissus. "Farewell," - said barely audible,
Hush her repeated: “Goodbye,” and froze.

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